Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Homestead Attack - Page 7

So I think he should be making some sort of sound or something as he runs. Don't know what though. What's a "breathing hard because you're running and freaked out" sound?

I've been waking up a six every morning so far and working on my book for at least two hours each day. It's been helping me to feel like I'm actually getting somewhere with this. Hopefully this will continue.

3 comments:

TheIcePixy said...

Hmm, that is a hard question, but I do believe you're right. He ought to be making some sort of sound. . . . Do you have any other comics where someone is running and freaked out that you could look to for ideas? I only have Bone, but I bet some of the super hero comics have stuff like that. I wish Michael had left me his ultimate Spider Man ones when he went on his mission. Those were fun to read.
Anyways, it looks really good. I love the facial expressions and gestures. Good work!

Brian Taylor said...

Hey thanks for commenting Julie :) Glad you're liking it. I will take your advice and look through all my comics for freaked out running sounds!

orangemily said...

This is a great page!
Waking up at 6am, that is dedication!