I'm doing everything in a stylized cel-shaded look. But I'm wondering if the backgrounds should be more painted than they are. Possibly?This scene is supposed to be the emotional core of the story and also show the relationship between Brandt and his grandfather.
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I only have one critique. It's actually your balloons. Don't worry—I make the same mistake. But take a look at this advice. Your interior border's are a little close on a few of those bubbles.
Also, I learned a lot from this article. I didn't even know some of this stuff (although I think some of it is arbitrary and pertains to a particular publisher)
I can't wait for more!
I like the feel of the page man. It works.
Definitely appreciate the comments guys! Richard, I read those links on lettering and balloons. Learned a lot! Thanks!
Keep your chin up! It looks great!
I think it looks pretty sweet dud. But man, you have been working on this , like, forever!! I would have lost interest by now...
As far as backgrounds, I think what yo have is just fine. Maybe if it was an exterior shot I would suggest some silhouettes of far ff shapes, but that's about it.
You're linework, as always, is top notch.
Peace out
M
I love how I'm the star of your comic. But you spelled the name wrong... ;)
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